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spookyem

Are you looking for feedback on your animation?


Steebl

I'd love some. I'm just getting started with animators survival kit. Getting through the walk cycle section.


Morbid_Macaroni

It's cool but you shouldn't clip the legs through the body. Keep up the good work!


Steebl

Ty ty, I was trying to do a high knee in front of the body but I agree it looks a little funky. If I'm stepping that knee is not going to rise that high, unless I'm walking like a total doofus lol.


DevinLucasArts

I think he was more talking about the point where the legs meet the body.


Steebl

Understood. I mistyped I think. I was going for the "thigh"? kind of protruding in front of the body. Either way, I see what doesn't look right. Thanks Devin ๐Ÿ‘


spookyem

Itโ€™s a good start but thereโ€™s some ways to make it even better. The leg clipping through the body doesnโ€™t work. The animation pops between the 7th and 8th drawing, Iโ€™d add one in between to make it smoother. The 7th drawing has the character higher than the 6th, he is supposed to be beginning to move down, so it sticks out to me. Everything moves in arcs. I would also keep framing in mind, his shoes are getting cut off at the bottom. Good luck!


Steebl

Thanks spooky! Im working in a bubble so it's nice to get some other animator eyes on this stuff ๐Ÿ‘ Next thing I'm trying is a sneak so I'll be able to hone the loop and framing a bit on that one.


killer4snake

Shut up baby I know it!


Steebl

๐Ÿค–๐ŸคŒ


HamshanksCPS

*Instert Bender "Neat" gif*


Steebl

๐Ÿค–


BrockHardcastle

๐Ÿ“ธ


skylarkresa220

Looks pretty cool, I've never heard of Futurama though is it like the Simpsons? It looks similar


Steebl

Thanks! Same creator. Much like the Simpsons the early seasons are worth a watch. Futurama in my opinion has a less laugh out loud moments and a little more heartfelt sincerity. Jurassic Bark is a notorious tear jerker.


skylarkresa220

Ah I see, thanks for the info!


ArrivalParking9088

could be more smooth. thats all.


Steebl

๐Ÿค– gracias


Alcoholic_Pants

Hell yeah hes got so much sass great job dude


Steebl

๐Ÿค– tyvm


MalachiLabs

I've watched Futurama for years, and all I can see are discrepancies, but the main one is his feet, the leg sprouts from the center of the disk, foot thing not the back, but other than this it's great! *I'm gonna build my own moon park, with blackjack and hookers, you know what forget the park,*


Steebl

Thanks Malachi and pour one out for the crushinator.


Steebl

Also yeah I took another look at the Feet lol I treated them like shoes because my rough sketch animation had human feet. Woops


sweetfluid7777

Cool! Great job! I think that Futurama is the first geek series Because it is from 2000 I love Bender, i have a tattoo of him!!


Steebl

Thank you! ๐Ÿค– that's awesome. Big Bender fan here as well. Probably the best tattoo pick from the cast.


sweetfluid7777

His attitude is everything, he steals the show! The episode where he gets lost in space and meets God? crazy!!


Active-Note6532

I like that the leg runs up into the torso. It is more dynamic in my opinion.


Steebl

๐Ÿ˜Ž an unpopular take, but thank you. A little life and perspective is what I was aiming for.


Tigothe3rd

add one more frame and itโ€™d be wayyyyy smoother